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Dream in Colour

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Giving in to sleep, I snuggle in and close my eyes.
Pictures are blurry and purples are blues,
I know that I am safe when I am here with you.
Dreams are all mine in lands far and grand,
Will you be my Prince Charming or at least hold my hand?
I know not where I'm going, but I wish that you would follow.
I don't want this to end, at least, not until tomorrow.
I would really like some feedback on this piece. This is my first written deviation, so please be nice! lol But I would love to hear from ya! :heart:
© 2007 - 2024 Caramelie
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emcdclxvi's avatar
I really enjoyed this.... It's pretty much sums up the end of every day for me... i never really new how to describe how turning in for the night feels, but you and I are on the same page I think. Bravo.